The story itself seems amazing and I can't wait to read more π€π€π€
I did notice a few things with Grammer wise through out. It's mostly just missing a word and then there is also quite a few paragraphs that will be just the same 1-3 sentences repeated.
I had intended on Just keeping the current theme instead of making two, that's why the other doesn't work. Might get rid of the option or create a light theme in the future!
I just finished the demo and I loved itβ₯! Your writing style is beautiful (reminds me of the way how movie scenarios are written) and your taste in colors (design).Was intrigued by the prologue, especially the starting scene. Dante's concern was touching and that line about protecting MC was quite cute.
You are a talented writer and I can't wait to read more of your writingπ
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Is this still being developed?
Does it ends here?
Dante is lovely to read aboutπ
I wanted to ask though about where can I read more about the lore of the story?
The story itself seems amazing and I can't wait to read more π€π€π€
I did notice a few things with Grammer wise through out. It's mostly just missing a word and then there is also quite a few paragraphs that will be just the same 1-3 sentences repeated.
Thanks for sending this in! Means a lot <3 The repetitive sentences have been fixed.
the display mode in browser isn't working.choosing the dark theme/mode doesn't change anything.
I had intended on Just keeping the current theme instead of making two, that's why the other doesn't work. Might get rid of the option or create a light theme in the future!
I am enjoying the story you did a good job
Thanks! That means a lot, hope you enjoy Ch2 <3
So I'm trying to play but I'm stuck so here the screenshot,
Fixed it! You can safely enjoy it now, apologies.
No worries :)
I just finished the demo and I loved itβ₯! Your writing style is beautiful (reminds me of the way how movie scenarios are written) and your taste in colors (design).Was intrigued by the prologue, especially the starting scene. Dante's concern was touching and that line about protecting MC was quite cute.
You are a talented writer and I can't wait to read more of your writingπ
Thanks lots!!! The point you made about it being like a movie is very interesting too. Never thought of it that way.